Me as Bad-Jelly The Witch
It all started when I was walking up a mountain and I walked in the dark and I saw a light, as soon as I got to the light I saw two tiny children, I asked them nicely “do you want to keep warm in a bag? “ and they said “ how nice of you yes I would”. When they went inside my bag I tied it up, I grab them and I jumped on my Zoom eagle and an eagle came and I did a power with my finger and struck lighting at the eagle and he went flying to the ground. I went to a old rusty castle and when I arrived my servant Yo Yo and Yoyo was a monster with sharp scars around his body and and the only person that could kill him was me. I could break anything with my lighting and later I had a Giant. He was black and he had no scars but he had red eyes and saber tooths that had blood which look like his teeth were red.
I have a black coat and a hoodie The have hair going to my left side and I got powers that are powerful and strong they are incredible to beat dragons. I have a mind like no other people I have a mind that can mark enemies that attack and animals that humans can eat. There are other people that have different power and the secret power that can defeat me is a Jaguar. Well lets get on with the kids I went and to the castle and the monster was roaring at the kids and the kids got frightened and I knocked them in a metal room with no doors it only had a little hole in the roof.
I had the key to open the whole roof but once they break out I will mark them and I will call Zoom the eagle to get them and that when I’ll make no holes in the roof. I will open by a remote and throw them and close the roof by my remote. The age of the kids was fourteen is the first one and second oldest was twelve.The kids had a eagle and the eagle was ripped like hulk also he had sharp wings that went ultra fast his feathers were special because he was too ripped. The eagle was strong but the kids eagle almost died by my monster because he annoyed the monster and he was weak around that time and the monster hurted the eagle. I haven’t killed my monster because he did a great job guarding the entrance of my castle, the kids escape when the giant was sleeping and they escape because I accidently press open on my remote while something was happening.
While the kids was escaping they got my power from the monster and when I tried to find them they kill me two on one. They were holding me and the monster killed me with his sharp teeth because he gain more power and now he could kill me. I was so sore that I died less than a second because he was ultra strong.
1 comments:
Nice kaitati i like the way you've written a heap of information about badjelly the thing you need to work on is your sentences some of them don't make sense but your story is still good
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