Bearly

This is a narrative about a Hero that I made up

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I can use nouns , verbs, adjectives and adverbs to make writing interesting.

I can use narrative structure to organise my ideas. Character, Setting, Problem, Reaction Action, Consequence, Resolution.  

Barely

One day there was a Hero called Barely he had super strength but it could run out and it can also come back. The sun was burning and the sand was hot. Barely went to swim until he felt a rumble people were running but he didn’t care the water went and it came back with six waves it forced him and Barely smash a building. A funky joker just appeared with his hands up it seem like he was controlling the waves until he just push the air and I broke the building with the water even more force to Barely. Barely shouted “ funky joker what's your name” and he said “ Funky” then Barely said under his breath “ thats a weird name” and he went away and the waves disappeared. Barely said I might fight him later on so Barely brought a assassin costume and it made his fist iron. His iron fist had iron spikes on the edge of Barley's knuckle. The assassin costume made Barely fly and Barely named it Assassin brothers. A year later Barely got use to his Assassin brothers and until funky came back with a massive panther. He came with a jet. Funky clap and said “Brooklyn” so Barely realise his name. Barely said “I know a trick for the panther to go away”. He was half panther and half cyborg Funky named the city clowns  but Barely didn’t accept it and Barely named it Vice city because the city didn’t have a name. Funky didn’t accept it and they had a fight. The first thing Barely did is Barely clap and said “Brooklyn If you want the chocolate cookies go and get it”. I flyed up and cuck it to the other side of the county and he sniff it down. Funky has a red nose and bright white skin he has a rainbow afro and scars on his face. I chuck a sticky bomb on Funky and when it blowed up he was still alive. He keep chucking fire ball at Barely but Barely kept on dodging it. Barely lift up a fire truck and put a gernard in it and chuck it and it blowed up then Barely realise if it not doing affect to him I should bring water Barely got the stuff that Funky was wearing last time and Barely push the air and I got a critical and Barely got his heart and he died.