I am a Year 4 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Ms Macfarlane.
Hi Kaitati I like your writing with all your great ideas and video and I like the video because that guy must be a professional at shooting but I think you have to proof read your story because some of it doesn't make sense but your story is great.
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Hi Kaitati I like your writing with all your great ideas and video and I like the video because that guy must be a professional at shooting but I think you have to proof read your story because some of it doesn't make sense but your story is great.
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